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{6} Come

31 Days: From Enemy to Heir

Day 6 of 31 Days: From Enemy to Heir

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Everything Obscurity had ever believed was crumbling around her.  She did not know what to feel or what to think, only that the world was spinning in her head.

Obscurity needed a rescuer, but she wasn’t convinced she wanted his kind of rescuing, especially if that meant going with the prince to that far-off kingdom.

She looked at the castle and realized she knew nothing about it.  What was it like there?  All she knew was that it wasn’t what she thought it was.  But everything it could be was just as terrifying as what it wasn’t.

So she held on to the one thing she had: her will.  She was not ready to go willingly.

Obscurity hardened her look. “What are you going to do with me?” she asked.  It was a threat more than anything.  Perhaps the prince wasn’t a tyrant.  But what was he?  She didn’t know, but she had to be stronger than the terror she felt inside until she figured it out.

The prince squinted up at the sun and then looked down at the cracked earth.  He drew a long, leafy stem into the dust with his toe and answered slowly, “If you stay here, you will die,” the words sounded like agony on his lips.  “But you can come with me, and I will make sure you are well cared for.  Or…” he paused, making flowers bloom where his feet touched, “…or, I could take you back to your husband.”

“He’s not my husband,” she answered hotly, still remembering the feel of that man’s fists upon her crumpled body.

“No.”  The prince stopped his idle drawing and looked her right in the eyes.  “No, he is not.”

He looked away again and said quietly, “None of them are.”

Obscurity was stunned.  She could not move and she could not open her mouth.  Her only thought was that she was standing before this man naked, fully clothed but naked, and she had nothing to hide behind but her own shame.

“Is this what you want, then?” she stammered when her words found her again.  “You want to judge me?  Well, you are right!  I have nothing to hide.  I am a wretch, and everything I have done in my life has been wretched.  I couldn’t even die today.  So go ahead.  Pile on your guilt and shame if that’s what you intend to do.  I can take it.”

“Obscurity,” he said sternly, and she blinked because she did not remember telling him her name, “the guilt and shame you carry is not mine.  You feel guilty and ashamed because you are.”

Wild, desperate, she screamed at him.  “What do you want?  What do you want with me?”

“I want to take it away.  I want to take you home.”

They were the simplest words, but they stabbed the deepest because she did not deserve them.

Why would he take her when he knew who and what she was?  There must be some mistake.  “You have decided to give me a home in your kingdom?  Me?” she whispered, half-choking on the words.

“I decided it before you ever opened your eyes.”

She turned away from him quickly because it pricked her hard and she could not stop the tears.  I should just run away now, she thought.  I should go back where I belong.  But as soon as she thought it, she realized she did not belong there anymore.

“Will I ever be able to go back?” she asked, looking back over the same road that had brought her there the night before.  Her citizenship was to a country that had done nothing but mistreat her.  But it was all she knew.

“You will not want to,” the prince said with a smile, and she noticed how unlike the Enchanter’s smile it was.  There was no hidden meaning, no evil intent, no eager hunger.  It was only, purely, love.

Suddenly, she saw the prince for who he really was.  He was love. 

Obscurity felt that love washing over her wounds and eroding her will.  She could not stop the trembling in her hands and she was sure she was going to vomit if she did not sit down.

Come

“I’m asking you, ‘Come.’” He stretched out his hand one more time, reaching down into the dirt for hers.

But she could not reach for it.  All the years of sorrow and pain boiled up and overflowed.  Heaving and sobbing, she collapsed at his feet, completely undone.

She was his.

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{4} Obscurity

31 Days: From Enemy to Heir

Day 4 of From Enemy to Heir, a 31 Days series.  Click here to begin at Day 1.

Her name was Obscurity, although she answered to far less.

Her mother had loved her, at least for the span of time between her birth and her mother’s realization that this child was not going to fix anything.  Then, and ever after, the child knew little affection, except for the rare moments when a half-hearted apology was pasted on an abuse, and the child was left to do the forgiving while the abuser did the forgetting.

So she was forgotten.

And hungry.  She had tasted just enough of love in her early years to know that she was starving for it now, now that she had to find it on her own. 

The Enchanter knew this too because he understood the power of love, and he feared it.  The only way he knew to keep his people from traipsing right after it and into the prince’s kingdom was to give them exactly what they wanted…almost.

Almost love was the best kind of lie because it was half-true.  It took the prince’s own good thing and fermented it until it was so sweet and intoxicating, no one noticed how utterly unsatisfying it was.  This kind of love was a feast that never made you full, and the Enchanter, who could see into the hearts of men, loved to spread his hands out over the table, encouraging all to gorge themselves on the abundance.

“The prince’s love is exclusive, limited, and binding,” he would say.  “Any of you can go and eat of it, but once you do, you will never again be free.”

Obscurity

 

It was deliciously terrifying, and the Enchanter loved to run it over his lips and into the ears of his people.  “Go on,” he said if any one of them looked too long on the castle walls.  “Go on and let the prince capture and enslave you in the name of love.  Let him bend your will and break you and turn you into one of his puppets.”

Some of the people doubted the Enchanter’s words because they had heard the old rumors which claimed that the prince’s kingdom was good and fair.  But the Enchanter cinched up the snare with the best line of all.  “I’d rather live poor and die free,” he said to the dirt-covered bracken on the street, and they all nodded and stood a little taller because they had made the better choice.

They might be poor, but at least they were free. 

Or so the Enchanter would have them believe.  Just as soon as they had taken the bait, he  melted into the shadows, laughing at how easily they believed something just because he said it was so.

Obscurity grew up with those words in her ears.  What she lacked in real freedom she made up for in will, which was almost the same thing.  She held on to her heady obstinacy with a fierceness that brought quick slaps to her cheeks and sharp words to her ears.

She would not be broken.  She was not loved, so what did it matter?  What did it matter if she was beaten and trampled down?  She would be beaten and trampled down if she held her tongue, so it might as well be loosed.  She might as well flaunt what little freedom she had.

Not everyone agreed.  She was not beautiful enough to exploit or ugly enough to be feared.  Most preferred Obscurity to stay in the shadows, pushed off in the corner and dragged out only when needed, forgotten, like always.

The man who kept her was one of these, and it was he who sent her, beaten and broken, into the night.  She had used her freedom to speak her mind, and he had used his to replace her with someone more compliant.

His door slammed in her face and she was left with nothing but a day’s wages.  The last thing she saw was a look of contempt in his eyes–not sadness, not even anger.  She wasn’t worth getting angry over.  It might have been different if he had loved her.

She crawled off into the darkness.  But she had nowhere to go.  No one cared anything about her.  No one would even miss her if she didn’t turn up for days.  No one would defend her if she died from her wounds.

“That’s the trick of freedom,” Obscurity thought as she stumbled along in agony.  “It doesn’t always work out in your favor.”

She looked up, reaching for air with lungs that hurt to breathe, and saw the castle floating in the night sky like a giant cloud.  It would be the last thing she saw before she died, and she hated it with every fiber of her being.  “How dare you?” she said bitterly.  “How dare you sit up there and watch me die.”

Then she felt the darkness reaching down and pressing heavy on her eyes.  And for once, she did not have the will to resist.

*Join us tomorrow for the continuation of the story.  

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{3} Outside the Gates

 

31 Days: From Enemy to Heir

Day 3 of 31.  Click on the image above to start at Day 1. 

The savages who pressed against the gates of the prince’s kingdom did not know that only the prince could open the gate to his kingdom.  They thought they could force their way in by means of their own strength and brute might.

They were wrong.  If they wanted to get inside, they’d have to go through him.  Only he wouldn’t open the doors for a banging, cursing mob.  They would have to come one at at time, like invited guests, and knock.

Others had come, and the prince had always thrown open the doors and embraced the seeker so quickly and earnestly, he soon forgot any hesitation in the coming.

But there were still so many on the other side who counted the prince an enemy.  If only they knew how much he longed to call them friends. 

Every day, the prince looked out over that enemy kingdom and was filled with sorrow and a deep, unfathomable love for these people who had declared their allegiance to an imposter.  He knew the truth about the beautiful Enchanter, and he knew that every member of that kingdom was marked for death.

The gates

So early in the morning, while most of his kingdom still slept, he put on beggar’s robes, mounted an old horse, and rode out the immense iron gates of the castle walls, seeking out a people to save.

That dangerous, dreadful land welcomed him greedily because it seemed to recognize that this prince had the power to undo it all.  This prince had the power to break the Enchanter’s spell. 

The curse

But the people’s eyes had become so accustomed to the beauty of their self-proclaimed sovereign, they could no longer recognize true royalty.  Instead of running to embrace him, they received the prince with violence and scorn.

One day, the prince was returning to the castle, bearing on his body the marks of an excursion that had not gone well.  The people he met had cursed him, thrown rocks and sticks at him, and tried to pull his horse down off the road.  Blood oozed from a gash in his forehead and trickled down his cheek.

Wearily, he road for home just as the sky was beginning to brighten with the day.  The early morning light made the road ahead hazy and more difficult to navigate than it was in the dead of the night.

Suddenly, something caught his eye.

The prince thought he saw a creature crawling in the mud along the side of the road.  He looked more closely.  It was only the waking shadows playing tricks on his eyes.

Or was it?

He guided the weary horse over, cautiously, to get a better look.  It was a wounded animal, and it moaned and writhed in misery.  The stench of sewage clung to the creature like the mud on its back.

“Poor animal,” the prince said, wondering how he was going to get a wounded, wild beast home on his already-nervous horse.

Just then, the creature looked up, and the prince found himself staring into knowing eyes.

This thing before him was not an animal at all, but a person.

For a moment, the prince could not move.  His mind was stunned by the level of filth and depravity before him.  No one in his kingdom lived like this.  His temples pounded hot with anger against the powers of darkness that created this hell.

He got off his horse.

“What has happened to you?” he asked, squinting through the mud for signs of injury.  All he saw was a fierce blackness staring back at him.  Every feature of this person was so disguised by filth and misery, it was impossible to tell if the wretch was sick or injured, young or old, or even male or female.

“Please, I have come to help.”  He took a step closer, close enough that the stench of rotten flesh rose up and gripped his nostrils.  He felt a wrestling in his stomach and fought to subdue it.

Just as he advanced, the creature retreated further into the shadows.

“Come…” he offered, reaching his hand down into the vileness.

At the sight of his pure, clean flesh, this person, this inhabitant of the enemy kingdom, leaped out at him.  Baring animal-like claws and half-rotten teeth, it cursed and shrieked and tore at him like the beast it resembled.

That’s when he knew.  It was a woman.

*Join us tomorrow as the story continues.  Day 4 is up next! 

Outside the Gate

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